0006541: Shatter Spell Description - Dungeon Crawl Stone Soup Tracker

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0006541

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2013-01-17 06:38

2013-01-17 06:57

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UnknownKirbyMan

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public

Assigned To

dolorous

Priority

normal

Resolution

done

Status

resolved

Product Branch

0.12 ancient branch

Summary

0006541: Shatter Spell Description

Description

Original text:
This spell causes a burst of concussive force around the caster, which will damage most creatures, although those composed of stone, metal or crystal, or otherwise brittle, will particularly suffer. The magic has been known to adversely affect walls.

It would read better with either
"although those composed of stone, metal or crystal, or otherwise brittle material, will particularly suffer."

or

"although those composed of stone, metal or crystal, or are otherwise brittle, will particularly suffer."

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(0020806) dolorous (updater) 2013-01-17 06:57	Done, using a slightly modified version of the first one ("although those composed of stone, metal, crystal or otherwise brittle material will particularly suffer.").

Issue History
Date Modified	Username	Field	Change
2013-01-17 06:38	UnknownKirbyMan	New Issue
2013-01-17 06:57	dolorous	Note Added: 0020806
2013-01-17 06:57	dolorous	Status	new => resolved
2013-01-17 06:57	dolorous	Fixed in Branch	=> 0.12 development branch
2013-01-17 06:57	dolorous	Resolution	open => done
2013-01-17 06:57	dolorous	Assigned To	=> dolorous

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