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If it doesn't fit anywhere else, it belongs here. Also, come here if you just need to get hammered.
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Sewers Scotsman
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Confidence Interval wrote:That's good but the scansion doesn't quite work on lines two and five.
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Grimm wrote:You'd better hope it's right; the last thing you want to do is arouse CI's dudgeon.
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Grimm wrote:I think if you did that he would consider it a black mark upon your escutcheon.
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tasonir wrote:
There once was a Naga Monk
Whose body had an awful funk
He slayed in cold blood,
And got splattered with crud,
It's no wonder that Naga so terribly stunk!
Ziggurat Zagger
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tasonir wrote:Format of limericks: 5 lines, with rhyme scheme AABBA. The A lines are long, the B lines are short. They are typically crude and/or sexual. Much better than haikus, which are supposed to be about nature. I like your short lines better, but you usually want to leave the lines 1, 2 and 5 somewhat longer, so don't shorten those
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Blades Runner
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thromnambular wrote:there once was a man from nantucket
whose MiFi was good so he said "fuck it"
he tabbed with a grin,
but lost it soon when
his poor MiFi went and kicked the bucket
and now I'm done spamming this thread
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