Ziggurat Zagger
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Joined: Thursday, 10th February 2011, 18:30
Penetrating Large Rocks crash through...
IMHO, "crash" implies stoppage.
I initially thought "smash" would be a good replacement ("smashes through"), as it implies travel through, but I'm of the mind that "blows through", "slams across" or "crushes over" would be better.
Not too keen on "through", as that's really the qualifier for the javelins piercing... through... a body; I think the large rock "penetration" is really an abstraction of "bowling over" the opponent to hit a further target.
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