From 0aff1fc787425c2ec7ac1dd06163fd36409c3ab5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Nicholas Feinberg <pleasingfung@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 19 Mar 2014 22:55:13 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Rewrote Agnes' description & dialogue.

---
 crawl-ref/source/dat/database/monspeak.txt | 25 ++++++++++++-------------
 crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/monsters.txt |  7 +++----
 2 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)

diff --git a/crawl-ref/source/dat/database/monspeak.txt b/crawl-ref/source/dat/database/monspeak.txt
index d7ed6e6..edde6c7 100644
--- a/crawl-ref/source/dat/database/monspeak.txt
+++ b/crawl-ref/source/dat/database/monspeak.txt
@@ -1731,7 +1731,7 @@ VISUAL:@The_monster@ coils and then uncoils.
 
 VISUAL:@The_monster@ winks several times @at_foe@.
 %%%%
-############ AGNES ### She is trying to get money and treasure
+############ AGNES ### She is an honorable warrior from a far-away land.
 Agnes
 
 @_Agnes_common_@
@@ -1741,29 +1741,28 @@ w:5
 %%%%
 _Agnes_common_
 
-VISUAL:@The_monster@ grins evilly.
+VISUAL:@The_monster@ bows.
 
-@The_monster@ says @to_foe@, "I need a new robe. I'll buy it with your money."
+@The_monster@ says @to_foe@, "You dishonor your ancestors."
 
-@The_monster@ says @to_foe@, "How can you wear that ugly dress?"
+@The_monster@ says @to_foe@, "I despise a dishonorable opponent."
 
-@The_monster@ screams @at_foe@, "Give me all your money!"
+@The_monster@ says @at_foe@, "It is my duty to kill you, but also my pleasure."
 
-@The_monster@ screams @at_foe@, "All treasure is mine! Mine!"
+@The_monster@ mutters, "I never trained for this."
 
-@The_monster@ screams @at_foe@, "Die, beast!"
+@The_monster@ says @at_foe@, "You will find the Path of Peace easy to follow, in death."
 %%%%
 _Agnes_rare_
 
-@The_monster@ screams @at_foe@, "You'll never get my money!"
-
-@The_monster@ screams @at_foe@, "Give me everything and get away!"
+@The_monster@ says, "The ORB is mine by right."
 
-@The_monster@ screams @at_foe@, "If you give me all your money I'll let you live. Maybe."
+#sepaktakraw reference
+@The_monster@ says @at_foe@, "I will kick you around like a rattan ball."
 
-@The_monster@ screams @at_foe@, "I want your rings! And amulets! And... EVERYTHING!"
+@The_monster@ asks, "Have you seen my kris anywhere?"
 
-@The_monster@ screams, "I hate dirty adventurers like you!" @player_only@
+@The_monster@ mutters, "I could really go for a good tofu right now."
 ## END Agnes ##
 %%%%
 ############ ANTAEUS ### A titan demonically corrupted into a hell lord.
diff --git a/crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/monsters.txt b/crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/monsters.txt
index 0af5ebe..f3d2eb2 100644
--- a/crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/monsters.txt
+++ b/crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/monsters.txt
@@ -26,10 +26,9 @@ It has been enchanted to dance through the air and attack under its own power.
 # Uniques
 Agnes
 
-This somewhat older looking spriggan carries a bladed staff (almost as large as
-she is). The pockets of her threadbare robe bulge with jangling coins. The
-coins and lajatang do not seem to slow her, though, as she darts to and fro,
-her pockets streaming behind her and trembling as if about to burst.
+This spriggan is aged and weathered from years of travel in distant lands. Her
+exotic weapon and astonishing speed both speak to the training she received
+there. Underestimate her at your peril!
 %%%%
 Aizul
 
-- 
1.8.5.2 (Apple Git-48)

From f69b1b54fbb180f021fc3083bab7ae7c11bcbb95 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Nicholas Feinberg <pleasingfung@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 19 Mar 2014 22:55:13 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Rewrote Agnes' description & dialogue.

---
 crawl-ref/source/dat/database/monspeak.txt | 25 ++++++++++++-------------
 crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/monsters.txt |  7 +++----
 2 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)

diff --git a/crawl-ref/source/dat/database/monspeak.txt b/crawl-ref/source/dat/database/monspeak.txt
index d7ed6e6..8d42dd0 100644
--- a/crawl-ref/source/dat/database/monspeak.txt
+++ b/crawl-ref/source/dat/database/monspeak.txt
@@ -1731,7 +1731,7 @@ VISUAL:@The_monster@ coils and then uncoils.
 
 VISUAL:@The_monster@ winks several times @at_foe@.
 %%%%
-############ AGNES ### She is trying to get money and treasure
+############ AGNES ### She is an honourable warrior from a far-away land.
 Agnes
 
 @_Agnes_common_@
@@ -1741,29 +1741,28 @@ w:5
 %%%%
 _Agnes_common_
 
-VISUAL:@The_monster@ grins evilly.
+VISUAL:@The_monster@ bows.
 
-@The_monster@ says @to_foe@, "I need a new robe. I'll buy it with your money."
+@The_monster@ says @to_foe@, "You dishonour your ancestors."
 
-@The_monster@ says @to_foe@, "How can you wear that ugly dress?"
+@The_monster@ says @to_foe@, "I despise a dishonourable opponent."
 
-@The_monster@ screams @at_foe@, "Give me all your money!"
+@The_monster@ says @to_foe@, "It is my duty to kill you, but also my pleasure."
 
-@The_monster@ screams @at_foe@, "All treasure is mine! Mine!"
+@The_monster@ mutters, "I never trained for this."
 
-@The_monster@ screams @at_foe@, "Die, beast!"
+@The_monster@ says @to_foe@, "You will find the Path of Peace easy to follow, in death."
 %%%%
 _Agnes_rare_
 
-@The_monster@ screams @at_foe@, "You'll never get my money!"
-
-@The_monster@ screams @at_foe@, "Give me everything and get away!"
+@The_monster@ says, "The ORB is mine by right."
 
-@The_monster@ screams @at_foe@, "If you give me all your money I'll let you live. Maybe."
+#sepaktakraw reference
+@The_monster@ shouts @at_foe@, "I will kick you around like a rattan ball!"
 
-@The_monster@ screams @at_foe@, "I want your rings! And amulets! And... EVERYTHING!"
+@The_monster@ asks, "Have you seen my kris anywhere?"
 
-@The_monster@ screams, "I hate dirty adventurers like you!" @player_only@
+@The_monster@ mutters, "I could really go for a good breadfruit right now."
 ## END Agnes ##
 %%%%
 ############ ANTAEUS ### A titan demonically corrupted into a hell lord.
diff --git a/crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/monsters.txt b/crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/monsters.txt
index 0af5ebe..f3d2eb2 100644
--- a/crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/monsters.txt
+++ b/crawl-ref/source/dat/descript/monsters.txt
@@ -26,10 +26,9 @@ It has been enchanted to dance through the air and attack under its own power.
 # Uniques
 Agnes
 
-This somewhat older looking spriggan carries a bladed staff (almost as large as
-she is). The pockets of her threadbare robe bulge with jangling coins. The
-coins and lajatang do not seem to slow her, though, as she darts to and fro,
-her pockets streaming behind her and trembling as if about to burst.
+This spriggan is aged and weathered from years of travel in distant lands. Her
+exotic weapon and astonishing speed both speak to the training she received
+there. Underestimate her at your peril!
 %%%%
 Aizul
 
-- 
1.8.5.2 (Apple Git-48)